Copywriting 101: Get to the Point
Business leaders are the worst. They use 79 words when 25 would do. They use fancy words when a five-buck phrase would work just fine.
A few weeks ago, I wrote that there were now four Sā to Marketing:
Short
Sweet
Slow
Steady
And when it comes to words, short & sweet is the way to go 95% of the time.
Drive to the point in all your marketing communications.